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:iconalphaprimesaviour:
Inspired by an anime image, this is my vision of how Jolene The Harbinger of death looks like in action.

The second outfit available to Jolene, this is the Light Recon Armor. This wallpaper comes to you in 1080p

Hope you guys like it.

As always, Comments and Critique is welcome

Blender 3D Cycles
Adobe Photoshop CS3
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Critique by ~Eratenphi Jan 24, 2013, 8:10:21 AM
I also think that the firing position is a little off, as Rasmus suggested she should be a lot more drawn out over the ground by moving her right leg back at a less steep angle and then extending her left outwards in the direction of the gun fire. She seems very scrunched up to the weapon as well she most definitely needs to have her right elbow raised to be horizontally in line with her hand.
Now for my original thoughts, so not reiterating another deviants points, the Muzzle flash just doesn't look right. Impact is right but its a bit over the top. If i stare at it for a while i start to like it but on first glance it needs work. It does seem to detract from the focus of the still being Jolene herself. however, everything else looks great, the dusty effect and the translucent texts really add a great quality to the style of picture. Would love to see how it looks with a different muzzle flash.
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~rasmusnicolaj Jan 23, 2013
I think her firing position is off. Her right elbow needs to go up to horizontal. Her left foot should be pointed more forward. Herright leg should be more angled backward. And her behind should be closer to the ground.
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~AlphaPrimeSaviour Jan 23, 2013   Digital Artist
Thanks for the feedback, will look into it. :)
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~rasmusnicolaj Jan 30, 2013
Your welcome. Has done my fair bit of shooting and also some instruction in shooting.
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